Well, I have more pictures from the weekend at g-ma's and I will put them up, but I want to take a break from uploading all of those pictures for a while....or for this post anyway. The girls are all very creative and it is so fun to see them express themselves in different ways. A, for instance, wore her converse type high-top checkered shoes with her skirt to church. I am always told to pick my battles, and that was not a battle worth picking to me, so she wore them, and she pulled it off beautifully. She kind of made me want to wear shoes like that with a skirt! Anyway, that is NOT what this post is about....don't where all of that came from....back to the point. The older two girls, M and H, have been writing stories a lot lately. It is so funny to see their personalities come out in their writing...I LOVE it! M likes to write stories that she already knows, like Jack in the Bean Stock. She does a great job of telling the stories, but has a hard time coming up with ideas on her own. She loves facts and really does tell them in a nice way. H, however, is much more like me. She loves to be creative...it just
ooooooooozes out of her. She loves to express herself in her writing. H can take the most boring fact and tie emotion to it somehow.
I love writing and always have. I actually think about things throughout the day and "write" it in my head. I was always very excited to write creative stories in high school rather than just facts. When I was in the 4
th grade, my teacher, Mrs. Bush gave us a creative writing assignment. I, however, did not understand the assignment at first and thought we had to tell how dinosaurs became extinct. You can just imagine my excitement when I found out that we could MAKE UP the story! I really can remember how excited I was about this. The next day I was pretty
embarrassed when Mrs. Bush started reading
every one's stories and they all pretty much told the encyclopedia's version of how dinosaurs became extinct. I was extremely nervous for mine to be read because mine was so different. Well, ends up that this assignment was a competition and guess who won first place..............the kid that sat next to me.......JUST KIDDING! I did! I was thrilled. I kept that paper for a long time and finally decided to throw it away when I was in college.
Luckily, Bethany saved my paper and gave it to me a few years ago.
So I decided that since the girls are so into writing right now, I gave them the same directions my teacher gave me in fourth grade. (I don't have a good memory, but I remember those directions really well. Kind of a
weird thing for me to remember so well.) I did not read them my paper and they could not discuss what they were writing. M is in the fourth grade and H in the third, so both of them are right about the same age that I was. Here are our papers:
(I corrected the spelling for the most part, but in H's I left the way she emphasized things. My girls just aren't the best spellers in town!)
"How Dinosaurs Became Extinct" by M
Some people wonder how dinosaurs got extinct. So I got the answer. This is how dinosaurs got extinct. The dinosaurs lived in New York. Then the world went black. The dinosaurs were saying, "What is going on here?" They were frightened. A big star was going right toward them! It landed on the earth. It only killed half of the dinosaurs. And the others were safe. Then the light went toward them. They were frightened too! Then all of the dinosaurs were extinct. The End
"How Dinosaurs Became Extinct" by H
Do you know how dinosaurs were extinct? Well I can tell you this. There were different kinds of d-i-n-o-s-a-u-r-s on the earth. There was the duck d-i-n-o-s-a-u-r-s and many many other d-i-n-o-s-a-u-r-s.
Onnnnnnne day there was a sound. It was a w-e-i-r-d weird sound. None of the weird dinosaurs knew what it was. It was a rumbling sound.
The ground was shaking crazy. The dinosaurs were out of their minds! They had no no no clue! They were just crazy! Then a big rock hit the earth and all the dinosaurs ran. But the earth exploded and all the dinosaurs were dead. That is how the dinosaurs were extinct.
"What Happened to Dinosaurs?" by Trinity
Different people say different things that happened to the dinosaurs. Some people say they just plopped over and died. But I don't think that is true, do you? Well, anyway, one dark dark night all the dinosaurs were going to have a dinosaur reunion. They came from China, Japan, and even Africa. Some dinosaurs waited over 20 days to get there. Finally, everyone was there. When everyone was ready, the dinosaurs went out to get
moondrops.
Moondrops were candy that dinosaurs loved. One morning the dinosaurs were picking
moondrops, but they were not picking them where they usually do. They were picking the
moondrops far far away from the cabin. There was nothing but trees around. Rain started pouring down. The dinosaurs were running to a tree when a bunch of rainbows came down and stuck every one of them. Now when you see a rainbow, it makes you think about the dinosaurs and how they became extinct.